This is an excellent analysis - for the most part, you define terms, then explain them in context and provide appropriate examples.
To improve: - are the shot types 'simple'? Think very carefully about the language you use and whether you could explain things more clearly using terms - use more terms, specifically when talking about 'setting' and lighting - could you add more detail and find more specific terminology? - what type of transition is a pinwheel? - break AIDA up into more detail - more needed on persuasion techniques, e.g., USP, advertising by association, celeb endorsement etc. - see sheet on blog - add a reference list.
James,
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent analysis - for the most part, you define terms, then explain them in context and provide appropriate examples.
To improve:
- are the shot types 'simple'? Think very carefully about the language you use and whether you could explain things more clearly using terms
- use more terms, specifically when talking about 'setting' and lighting - could you add more detail and find more specific terminology?
- what type of transition is a pinwheel?
- break AIDA up into more detail
- more needed on persuasion techniques, e.g., USP, advertising by association, celeb endorsement etc. - see sheet on blog
- add a reference list.
EllieB
Excellent - well done James.
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