You have made a great start here but you have missed out a couple of key terms/techniques – I didn’t see manipulation of time and space or identifying the / with the main protagonist but there may be more – use you original sheet as a tick list to make sure you cover them all. You have managed to cover the other terms very well and your examples are well-chosen. You do however, need to explain the other transitions and say when they are used (and find some examples to show them too). Beautifully written and a pleasure to mark.
James,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a great start here but you have missed out a couple of key terms/techniques – I didn’t see manipulation of time and space or identifying the / with the main protagonist but there may be more – use you original sheet as a tick list to make sure you cover them all. You have managed to cover the other terms very well and your examples are well-chosen. You do however, need to explain the other transitions and say when they are used (and find some examples to show them too). Beautifully written and a pleasure to mark.
Ellie
Excellent - great comprehension of techniques and wonderful examples.
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