You have written a solid evaluation of the process of creating the final product and you have provided evidence in the form of questionnaire responses.
To improve you need to write more about what, specifically, worked well and what could have been improved based on the research conducted and in your own view. To do this, systematically work through the feedback and pick out key points whilst then backing them up with screenshots from the advert itself.
James,
ReplyDeleteYou have written a solid evaluation of the process of creating the final product and you have provided evidence in the form of questionnaire responses.
To improve you need to write more about what, specifically, worked well and what could have been improved based on the research conducted and in your own view. To do this, systematically work through the feedback and pick out key points whilst then backing them up with screenshots from the advert itself.
Ellie