A very good initial introduction to the news; you have related Galtung and Ruge's news values stories you have found and your work on bias is strong. You need to add detail in two specific areas to improve: 1. You need to provide an in-depth textual analysis of a starting sequence - you need lots of what and why here alongside an embedded video. 2. When discussing the Chowles, you need to explore narrativisation in a lot more depth and it is the 'why' again that needs a bt more work.
Add some images and correct the spelling of Galtung too please, but overall, a good, strong start.
James,
ReplyDeleteA very good initial introduction to the news; you have related Galtung and Ruge's news values stories you have found and your work on bias is strong. You need to add detail in two specific areas to improve:
1. You need to provide an in-depth textual analysis of a starting sequence - you need lots of what and why here alongside an embedded video.
2. When discussing the Chowles, you need to explore narrativisation in a lot more depth and it is the 'why' again that needs a bt more work.
Add some images and correct the spelling of Galtung too please, but overall, a good, strong start.
Ellie